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Post by Ash-kun on Sun Jun 13, 2010 9:57 am

Hyuu~! ^^
Just as promised I have posted my first poem... Hope you like it ^^ Any changes or suggestions are always welcome ^^

Just by a single world you made me melt you made me melt
Just by a single look you made me cofess about how I felt

Just by a touch you made me near you made me near
Just by a single kiss you made it something that I can't bear
Just like the touch of dark losing you made me fear

Just like a thunder you made me suffer in a good way
Just like a light after a rain you brightened my day...

You stole me completely
You made me change completely

You stole my everything...
Happiness is what you bring...
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Post by Otonashi-kun on Sun Jun 13, 2010 12:31 pm

wow, really nice. I dont think anything should be chanced lol, sounds quite nice. When you wrote this, did you have someone in mind? Smile
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Post by Riku on Mon Jun 14, 2010 12:09 am

Ash-kun wrote:Hyuu~! ^^
Just as promised I have posted my first poem... Hope you like it ^^ Any changes or suggestions are always welcome ^^

Just by a single world you made me melt you made me melt
Just by a single look you made me cofess about how I felt

Just by a touch you made me near you made me near
Just by a single kiss you made it something that I can't bear
Just like the touch of dark losing you made me fear

Just like a thunder you made me suffer in a good way
Just like a light after a rain you brightened my day...

You stole me completely
You made me change completely

You stole my everything...
Happiness is what you bring...
Sounds good. Do you have a name for this?
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Post by Ash-kun on Mon Jun 14, 2010 12:10 pm

Otonashi-kun wrote:wow, really nice. I dont think anything should be chanced lol, sounds quite nice. When you wrote this, did you have someone in mind? Smile

Hyuu~! ^^ Thanks ^^ Yep I thought of someone special ^^ and I can post others if you want too ^^ Smile
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Post by Ash-kun on Mon Jun 14, 2010 12:12 pm

Riku wrote:
Ash-kun wrote:Hyuu~! ^^
Just as promised I have posted my first poem... Hope you like it ^^ Any changes or suggestions are always welcome ^^

Just by a single world you made me melt you made me melt
Just by a single look you made me cofess about how I felt

Just by a touch you made me near you made me near
Just by a single kiss you made it something that I can't bear
Just like the touch of dark losing you made me fear

Just like a thunder you made me suffer in a good way
Just like a light after a rain you brightened my day...

You stole me completely
You made me change completely

You stole my everything...
Happiness is what you bring...
Sounds good. Do you have a name for this?

Thanks ^^ Hyuu~! ^^ Name...? I will think of one soon and let you know... and I think suggestions are welcome for a name too... ^^ I am not sure what to name it exactly....
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