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Post by Ash-kun on Mon Jun 14, 2010 12:30 pm

Hyuu~! ^^
Second version of my first poem ^^
You stole my heart II

When I hear a single word from you, I start to melt, I start to melt
When I get a single look from you, I get a feeling that I have never felt

Just like a lightning, you hit my heart, you hit my heart
Just like that I don't wanna be every from you...apart...

You stole my heart
You stole a part of me....
Why don't you feel the way I feel?
Why can't you see...?


The dreams in my night have you painted all over them
My feelings during the day have you draped all over them
Just a word of love from you makes me wanting more...

You stole my heart
My little little heart...
Though I don't want to complain
I had always wanted it to be stolen by someone like you
Coz in this world people like you are so few...
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Post by Otonashi-kun on Mon Jun 14, 2010 12:52 pm

I like this poem, and I really like the last verse, its very different than others that i've read before.
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Post by Ash-kun on Tue Jun 15, 2010 12:11 pm

Otonashi-kun wrote:I like this poem, and I really like the last verse, its very different than others that i've read before.

Hyuu~! ^^ That is good then ^^ -relieved sigh- Really...? Probably ^^
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Post by Otonashi-kun on Tue Jun 15, 2010 5:02 pm

Ash-kun wrote:
Otonashi-kun wrote:I like this poem, and I really like the last verse, its very different than others that i've read before.

Hyuu~! ^^ That is good then ^^ -relieved sigh- Really...? Probably ^^
haha, keep up the good work.
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Post by Riku on Wed Jul 14, 2010 4:27 am

I like it man. Wow I really haven't logged on in a while. lol How much of this do you write? I'd like to read more.
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Post by Ash-kun on Thu Jul 15, 2010 12:16 pm

Riku wrote:I like it man. Wow I really haven't logged on in a while. lol How much of this do you write? I'd like to read more.

Oh Hyuu~! ^^ thank yo so much *happy* XDD I write a lot ^^ whenever I want XD if you want I can post more and try out my story Harry potter fanfiction if you want ^^ Hope you like it too ^^
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Post by Ash-kun on Thu Jul 15, 2010 12:16 pm

Otonashi-kun wrote:
Ash-kun wrote:
Otonashi-kun wrote:I like this poem, and I really like the last verse, its very different than others that i've read before.

Hyuu~! ^^ That is good then ^^ -relieved sigh- Really...? Probably ^^
haha, keep up the good work.

Hyuu~! ^^ Yep I will ^^
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Post by Otonashi-kun on Fri Jul 16, 2010 12:16 am

Do you got any poems that portray more of a happy atmosphere?
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Post by Ash-kun on Sat Jul 17, 2010 2:22 pm

Otonashi-kun wrote:Do you got any poems that portray more of a happy atmosphere?

Hyuu~! ^^ Happy...? I kinda have a mix of happiness and loss if you want I can post it soon ^^
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Post by Otonashi-kun on Sat Jul 17, 2010 5:25 pm

Ash-kun wrote:
Otonashi-kun wrote:Do you got any poems that portray more of a happy atmosphere?

Hyuu~! ^^ Happy...? I kinda have a mix of happiness and loss if you want I can post it soon ^^
That would be great.
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