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Poems II

Post by Ash-kun on Sun Jul 25, 2010 12:49 pm

Love by Ash-kun

Actually I luv this show Ishaan in my language (hindi)in my country (India), it is the best show and my favorite, the music is so cool so wonderful so beautiful I felt the feeling in my heart I understood it .... it filled my every part and left me listenng to it again and again... again... XDDD
So I wrote this poem based on one of the "Ishaan's" SONGS - PS: I am crazy about the songs of this show XDDD
hope you enjoy Hyuu~! ^^

Our LOVE

My heart's condition, how can I express them?
Can I portray them through the expression of your eyes?

THe dreams of our eyes are now smiling through our imagination
The beat of our hearts are now sounding through our separation

Lift your face, tell me abot your heart's unsaid things that you have hidden
Are you gonna trap me in them?
So our love has joined now, so wht is there to hide? to feel shy about?
You really are my lucky gem!

The season of my heart's desire, how can I convey them?
They cannot be hidden

In the nearby air which is filled with your laughter
Makes my heart beat fster
Makes my heart beat faster...

In my every breath which is fille whith your scent
When I am trapped in your intent gaze
Makes my heart feel happier...

THe way I feel wth you so safe so comfortable
Makes my heart feel safer... safer....

The thing that I wanted, that I needed for us...
I wish hat could happen... that we could get that future for us...
Makes my heart feel calmer....

So the love between us has increased...
So wht is there to feel uncomfy about?
he rain and snow fall of my craves..
can they be conveyed by a single shout?

You stole my every seond, every thought
Every breth and filled it with you
So now let us live freely and happily through every second forever truly

so the love that has connected us cannot be broken..
so the needs and desires cannot be hidden....

Thanks for reading ^^ Please leave a comment ^^ -bows- Hope this made you feel happy ^^
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Post by Otonashi-kun on Tue Jul 27, 2010 3:07 am

Lol, thats better. I don't think I could stand another depressing poem, I might have gone emo. lmao jk obviously. lol but yeah, great work. Its surprisingly long. So, I suppose your thinking of someone special to you when you write this? You two goin out? or married? or what? lol Hope you dont mind me asking Wink
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Post by nm2 on Tue Jul 27, 2010 3:09 am

Oh, this is nice ^^ How long did it take for you to write this?
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Post by Ash-kun on Tue Jul 27, 2010 11:01 am

Otonashi-kun wrote:Lol, thats better. I don't think I could stand another depressing poem, I might have gone emo. lmao jk obviously. lol but yeah, great work. Its surprisingly long. So, I suppose your thinking of someone special to you when you write this? You two goin out? or married? or what? lol Hope you dont mind me asking Wink

Hyuu~! ^^ Thanks it is more happy ne? Good then the last one was not? XDDD nvm... thanks ^^ yea long mine are often long but i cut shor them and write ^^ better that way, well yesh of course I was... but they already have a special person and lol I am just 15... 11th grade no way of thinking for marriage XDDDD
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Post by Ash-kun on Tue Jul 27, 2010 11:02 am

nm2 wrote:Oh, this is nice ^^ How long did it take for you to write this?

Hyuu~! ^^ Thank you so much ^^ actually not long just 15 minutes, i usually think about it before, day dream about it, i have heard that song quite a lot so it just came when i listened to it again XDDD glad you like it ^^
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Post by Otonashi-kun on Tue Jul 27, 2010 4:17 pm

Ash-kun wrote:
Otonashi-kun wrote:Lol, thats better. I don't think I could stand another depressing poem, I might have gone emo. lmao jk obviously. lol but yeah, great work. Its surprisingly long. So, I suppose your thinking of someone special to you when you write this? You two goin out? or married? or what? lol Hope you dont mind me asking Wink

Hyuu~! ^^ Thanks it is more happy ne? Good then the last one was not? XDDD nvm... thanks ^^ yea long mine are often long but i cut shor them and write ^^ better that way, well yesh of course I was... but they already have a special person and lol I am just 15... 11th grade no way of thinking for marriage XDDDD

lol, right. i forgot your age. oh and when i said 'the last one' i meant the first poem you submited.
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